Nib #47 — 5 Writing Tips from C.S. Lewis

What with all the food coma, Black Friday shopping, and family-time to catch up on today, this week’s Nib is going to be even nibbier than usual.

To wit, five writing tips from one of the O.G. Inklings, C.S. Lewis, offered in response to a letter from a young writer in the summer of 1956. Enjoy:

1. Always try to use the language so as to make quite clear what you mean and make sure your sentence couldn’t mean anything else.

2. Always prefer the plain direct word to the long, vague one. Don’t implement promises, but keep them.

3. Never use abstract nouns when concrete ones will do. If you mean “More people died” don’t say “Mortality rose.”

4. In writing. Don’t use adjectives which merely tell us how you want us to feel about the things you are describing. I mean, instead of telling us the thing is “terrible,” describe it so that we’ll be terrified. Don’t say it was “delightful”; make us say “delightful” when we’ve read the description. You see, all those words (horrifying, wonderful, hideous, exquisite) are only like saying to your readers “Please, will you do my job for me.”



5. Don’t use words too big for the subject. Don’t say “infinitely” when you mean “very”; otherwise you’ll have no word left when you want to talk about something really infinite.

Happy Thanksgiving, and until next week… keep writing!